Originally Posted By: Torrey Bliss
A very fine work of art Robert! You are a tremendous lyricist! I envy the skill with which paint pictures with your words! I can really relate to your imagery in this one! I love the way you keep stretching your boundaries musically with each new offering! A haunting lovely sound in this! Very nice work! Thanks, Torrey


Torrey,
I`m glad some of the images sounded familiar to you and that you heard something new in the song-thank you for your comments.

Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
How could anybody not listen after reading your description of the tune? smile

What a strong hook and write. To us you've taken your poetry and applied
it to a relationship situation that many can readily relate to. The result is a
write with a boat load of great lines. An intelligent write that could fit
many different genres.

And the vocals, the melody, the arrangement and the backing tracks are
all hittin' the note aided by a fine mix. Love the ending too.

We like it...a lot.

J&B


J&B,
I thought the play on words in the title would get attention... and maybe distract from the subject, so I appreciate that the relationship theme can still be heard.
Your listens and supportive comments are appreciated!


Originally Posted By: rsdean
Robert,

This song is a showcase for your style of folk... A beautiful mysterious lyric and a great vocal / delivery.

A great mix as well - you always deliver!

"I heard waves crash round the king
tried to turn the tide
felt the white heat of truth
shine brown eyes"

Wow!

Bob


Bob,
Thanks for your listen and generous comments- good to see you back on the forum.

Originally Posted By: Greg Johnson
Great song Robert!! Love the arrangement and vocal....one of your best! And your lyrics are always great....love that title!!! Take care. Greg


Thanks very much Greg!


Robert