I think your statement "more like a summer painting"...
Aptly describes the vivid artistic images dwelling within your lyrics...
Actually from a artistic painter's point of view...
Quote:
In the bed of my dreams
on the sheets I'm dyeing.

Makes perfect sense to me...

It leads right into visual painter's images of the 2nd verse...
Really cool lyrics, at least, to my eyes.

I'll be waiting for the update with "the new steel drums".

Last edited by Jim; 12/06/19 05:18 PM. Reason: 2nd line - you to your

Jim
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