Originally Posted By: Noel96
Hi Robert,

You've really established a niche for your songs here in the forum. Your lyric and musical 'voice' comes across strong and clear in all you do.

These lyrics contain some mighty powerful images as they're artistically sprinkled throughout a wonderful journey in words. You really are an excellent wordsmith!

That opening was incredibly mood-inducing... very inventive and it pulled at the imagination. You had me wondering where on earth you were going to take me!

I enjoyed it!
Noel


Noel,
Glad you enjoyed the intro- the title seemed to demand opening with atmosphere!
I appreciate your generous comments.

Originally Posted By: Ezekiel's Storm
The introduction is hauntingly beautiful and establishes the mood of the song quite well. The song is chock full of lyrical nuggets, and I am going to point to my favorite lines, which are the same as Floyd's.

"should have known the quiet ones/keep their powder dry"

Excellent lyric writing with those lines.

And your hook "I saw you/conducting lightning" is a fantastic image.




Thanks for that review- most encouraging!

Robert