Originally Posted By: edshaw
Oh, Herb, the updated 12/12 version is way improved over the first posted. Makes an interesting comment that a musician can go back into a song he has already done and tweak it, even thought the first sounded great at the time.
Compared with the first, the second no longer seems hurried or pressured, the consonants d-p-t always a challenge, were given the attention they deserved in the second version, and your natural tremolo vocal came through better. Enjoyed that.
I think Rich Mac has a point in that some contemporary gospel and Christian can be over the top. The genre remains sacred music.


IN ham radio, we call this a "recheck".... very appreciative that you took the time to post your thoughts on version 2.0 If you're going to tweek something, the primary rule should be, don't break the original. Thanks for pointing out what you hear to be the improvements.

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