This is lovely and unsettling too.
I think that the observation about the vocal being too far forward may be right.
I'm not sure the Hotel California style lead early on was a good fit and those solos are a bit muddy & quiet.
I think this needs the sort of string arrangement that BIAB doesn't provide.
I think your arrangement and chord are really good but the guitar could be re thought.
Lovely stuff regardless of my nit picking.


Cheers
rayc
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