Hi Dave,

"Did I say something unforgiving or unfair
to betray the trust I made you doubt was really there?"

When I read that line I thought: 'What a great line, but it's gonna take a good melody line and vocal to make it sing well"

And that's exactly what you did. Throughout the whole song. Simply beautiful in lyric, melody and delivery.

"So Breathe". What a great title to build a song around. And what a great song.

I would like to hear a little more variation in the guitar part, but that's a personal thing. I loved it.

Martin


Music is what feelings sound like.