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Good morning Jim
Thank you for the feedback, as requested, lyrics and chords
Wanna bring you flowers Key C 4/4 85 bpm (Chris Oosthuizen aka WobblyGstring) INTRO: CIII / EmIII /DIII /GIII VERSE 1: C Dm I thought I'-- d call you on the phone G C to hear your voice Tell you I am alone C to tell-- you I Am love-- you-- F G to hear your voice Tell you I am alone Dm G Wanna call you by your name But all i see C Em is your gentle smile In a black trim frame EmII / GII CHORUS: C Dm Wanna bring you flowers But I can't find your grave G C as you,ve been spread around the sky, wind and waves C Wanna to bring you daisies Am plucked, fresh from the earth F G but all I find is an empty wooden urn Dm G Wanna write a letter and talk about my pain C Em to tell you that -- -- i missed you again-- EmII / GII VERSE 2: C Dm Wanna send you mail but to no avail G C your account was closed only an old cold trail C Am some old letters and some outdated mail F G Recall the day you sounded so frail Dm G said you'll go away some place far away C Em where your soul will rest and your spirit play EmII / GII CHORUS: C Dm Wanna bring you flowers But I can't find your grave G C as you,ve been spread around the sky, wind and waves C Wanna to bring you daisies Am plucked, fresh from the earth F G but all I find is an empty wooden urn Dm G Wanna write a letter and talk about my pain C Em to tell you that -- -- i missed you again-- EmII / GII
INTERLUDE: CIII/ DmIII/ GIII/ CIII CIII/ AmIII/ FIII/ GIII DmIII/ GIII/ CIII/ EmIII EmII/ GII FINIS: A F#m So a merry Christmas And a Happy new Year C#m A Wish you were here to take away my fear F#m C#m E May you rest in Peace dear Mom
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Good song with a nice lyrical concept, I enjoyed it. My favorite lines:
Wanna call you by your name But all i see C Em is your gentle smile In a black trim frame EmII / GII
CHORUS: C Dm Wanna bring you flowers But I can't find your grave G C as you,ve been spread around the sky, wind and waves C
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Thank you sir, glad you liked the lyrics
Regards
Chris
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This is very good. I personally liked the reverb vocals. It was like you were talking to your mother from far away. And you are as you are here on earth and she is in heaven.
Excellent lyrics, good vocal, and mix.
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Hello MarioD
Thank you for the feedback, and I never thought of the reverb in that way. Yeah she was a great parent, a very tough, resilient and spirited woman. I really hope this song reaches others who share the same feeling.
Have a wonderful day!
Chris
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A pretty song, and a wonderful tribute!! Having lost both of my parents in the last 4 years, I can certainly relate. The music has the feel of some of the 60's British music that I love! Enjoyed this a lot!! Take care. Greg
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Nice tribute and this comes across to the listener as it should, panning , reverb, vocals lo high or buried . I've heard it all through the decades and that's the hits in the charts I'm talking about, you have to be different, experiment, if not everything would sound the same no variety in music.
Wow what a thought, nice one.
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Nice tribute and this comes across to the listener as it should, panning , reverb, vocals lo high or buried . I've heard it all through the decades and that's the hits in the charts I'm talking about, you have to be different, experiment, if not everything would sound the same no variety in music.
Wow what a thought, nice one.
Thanks Mr Beatmaster. Thank you sir! Your feedback is encouraging and inspirational. I truly hope that I can produce much better material in the future. Regards Chris
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