Originally Posted By: Deej56
Greg,

Gorgeous lyrics--poetically perfect, the narrative precise and touching. And some brilliant lines, my personal favorite being "truly being free before we knew what freedom was". Wow! Your talent continues to amaze me.

Production wise, so stellar. For fine tuning, though, there are spots between lines when your intake of breath comes across pretty apparent on the mic, which makes the vocal a little less clean. An easy fix--I usually look to dampen the volume in between. Just something to thing about.

Killer tune, Greg. Really, a songwriter's pride and joy--well done!

Humble regards,

Deej


Thanks Deej!! Yeah, that was actually my favorite line too! I appreciate your kind review! Take care. Greg