Originally Posted By: MarioD
This is fantastic! Your lyrical approach here is just plain fantastic!
I liked everything about this one.

Super song!


Thanks Mario!

Originally Posted By: floyd jane
"some fall headlong into a song
movie heroes you played made you brave
this boy was saved by stories"

Nice!

A picturesque lyric, a story well-told.

The BAND works really well to carry the subject.

Another good one, Robert...

fj


Floyd,
This song was fun to write: which of my favourite novels to include?
I appreciate your kind comments.


Originally Posted By: Birchwood
Hi Robert,

he`d found his truth in fiction
birds of words took him out the window flying

The way you write your lyrics is so clever and nice. I like that very much in all your songs.
The way you build up your song(s) is probably the same as with your lyrics. At first I thought, where are you going to and then, at a certain moment somewhere in the song, it comes together.
I bet there are a lot of (grand) children around you to give you all that inspiration.

Hans


Hans,
I compensated for having no grandkids by becoming a dad again at age 55!
Its very encouraging to know a few listeners connect with my scribbles and warbles.
Thank you.


Robert