Tangmo,

Very intricate funky tune. Busy, but in a very good way. Mix is excellent! I can imagine this would be a challenging for lyrics smile
But you know what I would have done? I would either leave it the way it is or just put some phrasings in specific places. Use vocals as sound elements, not specifically a story telling write. In any case, this was a great listen (actually a couple)! Thank you for sharing.

Misha.