A good write, nicely done. laugh

The question of the title reminds me of advice I'd read in a songwriting book: if you're having trouble coming up with title of the song, perhaps you need to sharpen the hook a bit more.

And that's fine advice for a commercial market.

But if you're writing this for yourself - choose the title you think captures the spirit of the song best.

Personally, I think "Where I Sleep Alone" captures the core idea.

But if I had to bet money, I'd go with fj. wink

I liked the rain at the end - much more effective than placing it at the beginning.


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?