Cool song. You should spend a little time managing the esses and tch & Ts though. It's quite difficult to get a de-esser that will focus on all three and an attempt to cover them all seems to kill the "air" and shine of a vocal. If you use a DAW other than RealBand or Audacity you'll find a couple of cool ways to deal with the issues transparently.
the narrative, the vocal performance and whole package certainly make it worth that little extra effort.

Cheers
rayc
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