Hi Bruce,

This is a very nice song (to my opinion)
What a clever, but funny tale you are singing there. I could almost see it in front of me.
"I shake my chains and walk through walls
But you don't even notice me"

Very good
And the instruments fit very well in this haumnting scene
One little 'but': I think you have to trim your song from 3:07 min. till the end. Nothing can be heard, or maybe not with my ears,

Hans

Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130