A quick ditty I wrote with Torrey Bliss.
Superb drummer Greg Loyacano played & recorded the blistering guitar tracks.
BIAB did the drums.
I played bass.
Torrey edited the lyric and wrote an excellent melody and recorded the main, doubled and two harmony vocals.
Torrey & Greg have created a vehicle to carry off this little tale of Winston & Julia.
I was particularly thankful to Torrey as he's a VERY busy fellow and as such a superb writer performer and recordist he didn't need the distraction...
This song isn't finished - still mixing so welcome any suggestions, comments etc.

Based on the suggestions below

OK, I've had to reduce some bottom end in the guitars to allow the bass' bottom end to peak through.
More Vox n Bass
Lyrics...
NEXT!...
A little more tweaking based on the comments offered and a few others as well..
12th Feb mix

It’s not thought crime.
Don’t you see,
We’re out of time?
We’re out of time.

There’s nowhere to hide,
When you and me makes two.
In a private hell and overcoat,
Like wearing dead man's shoes.
Dancing away dystopia
Language becoming a gaol.
Self-fulfilling bureaucracy,
Hammers the nail

It’s not pantomime.
‘neath the chestnut tree,
We are out of time.
We are out of time.

We are dead, you & me,
And you know that it is crystalline
Rewrite our history,
Truth claims our last line.
Walking upstairs once again,
Screams behind the grate.
At today’s iteration,
For now, we will wait.

When will bells chime?
Oh, Julia spat,
We are out of time.
We are out of time.

Solo


This is not my thought crime,
Two plus two makes five.
We are out of time.
We are out of time.
OUTRO
It’s your thought crime,
Can’t you see,
We were out of time?
We are out of time.

Last edited by rayc; 02/11/20 05:37 PM.
Cheers
rayc
"What's so funny about peace, love & understanding?" - N.Lowe