Hi Jannesan,

What pleasant surprise, you rapping in the couplets and then singing smootly in the chorusses!
I enjoyed your song for how its composed and performed. Very well! And the sax gave your song a nice, cheerful twist. I see Dave mentioned this also in his post.

The climax towards the end works out very exciting. Everyone will tell you your name is Mister Charming!!!

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130