Ricky,

I think the faster tempo of your version makes the surprise ending even more surprising, because it leads the listener's expectations down a totally different path. If I hadn't already heard the first version, knowing what was coming, I would have presumed this song to be about a girl who is boy-crazy in a different way. If it is your goal to set an expectation, then reveal an alternative meaning, this version does that for me.

Good job! Clever idea!

Last edited by Pat Marr; 02/01/10 03:32 AM.