I enjoyed the song! smile

But I think there's too much competing with the vocal. For example, the piano, the organ, and so on.

I think it's a good idea to make sure that nothing competes with the vocal - that should be the center of the song. A background instrument can temporarily come to the forefront during a break in the vocals, but when the vocals come back in... back down it goes!

Just a thought.


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?