Belladonna,

Very nice write on this one—admire the use of near rhymes to keep your lyrics on point, not easily done and they all work really well. And the melody and classic country backing work well. I think I would have liked you to go up on that last “city of gold” in the chorus before the outdo, just to give it a change up . . . and maybe again going up on “Eldorado” in the second to last line in the outro. Just a suggestion to think about. Nicely done!

Kind regards,

Deej