Hi James and DeeJ ...

I really like the song. DeeJ, I think your vocal gives this somewhat of a rock-ballad feel. Sweet!

James ... A really nice lyric and arrangement. Nice work!

I really enjoyed the key modulations ... they always seem to breathe new life into a song. A tip of the hat to both of you.

Alan


PS: DeeJ ... you wondered if your vocal is right for the song. Your rock-ballad delivery is good for this song. I would suggest, perhaps, cutting back just a wee bit on the vocal higher EQ. I also think that would help the voca; to sit a little more comfortably in the mix. But, heck ... what do I know! I'm just a guitar picker who occasionally molests the airways with my singing.

All in all, this is a very nice presentation. wishing you both well.


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