Thanks everybody!

fj: I did think of the drum loop being incongruous, but decided to leave it in for contrast, if nothing else ... to have SOMETHING to drive the track forward, else it may sound like a dead cat or something ;-) BUT: if you feel it's incongruous still, I'll give it another listen and see.

Thanks everybody - it's been a busy few days, I haven't had much of a chance to listen to everyone else's songs as much as I would have liked, but this will change :-) I'm grateful for your listening time and for your comments!!!

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