ray,

It is fun to follow along on this journey...the various versions...

The overall sound is cool. Big. And nicely cohesive.

The vocal seems to sit in the mix better in JOANCBstr+Melgd.
It seemed in a bit of a different space than the track in JOANCBstrNOMelgd - the track has an "airiness" and the vocal has a "density" (heavy mids) and they seem at odds.

There is an odd glitch/drop at 1:11 in JOANCBstr+Melgd. And again at 2:40... 3:37...4:13...4:58...
I like the mix of this one.

fj