Hi Glenn,

Your vocals are very good in this song; warm and close. The song itself is also nice with a sweet melody. But you can strengthen your song some more if you want:
1. On some occassions it felt as if you were singing was a bit uncertain. I think you can gain some more volume in your vocals if you sing with some more conviction, say more freely.
2. In the mix, I heard the trumpetsection was located on the far right. They were a bit to soft and I would place them a bit closer to the middle with a bit more volume.
3. About the piano you already heard they are too upfront, so I don't say much more on that.

Maybe you hate me at this point, but maybe it will help you. My approach is to help you.

Stay safe,
Hans

Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130