I think as an instrumental, it needs something more melodic to hold it and lessen any repetitivness.

The song seems to get more 'lost' with the quiet phrasing at 1:40 and 2:15.

Can you experiment with an alternative lead instrument? Not trying to be critical, but something that plays a melody line that counters the regularity of the backing might enhance the song.

Hope this feedback is constructive in some way.


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