Bawb,

I like your music. Good writes - melody and lyric, both. (and there is a lot of this style of music that does not appeal to me - to give some reference)

Excellent arrangement/production.

And I really like your vocals. In this piece, there is a bit of a "disconnect" between the vocals and the production - mostly volume-wise, I think. The tracks as a whole are well mixed relative to each other and have a somewhat "mellow" tone. The vocal has some accentuated highs (a "crispness") that put it "in a different space" than the tracks. I would guess all that needs to be done is to roll off some high EQ (your vocal recording is clear enough that it can handle that) and lower the volume some (I'd guess 2 dB...but perhaps a little less).

You are putting up some good stuff here...

fj

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