Hans,

WOW! This is OUTSTANDING!

This opening is so inviting. The guitar and flute are are a nice combination.
The piano comes in perfectly.
Your vocal is excellent. The soft, breathiness suits you! It sits in the mix just right.
The additions of the drums is nice.
The use of the staccato strings is such a nice change.
The solo guitar works really well.

The extra vocals panned either side adds nicely to the build.
The main vocal at that point is slightly "too crisp" (but not by much).

A really nice lyric. And a beautiful melody. Terrific write.

This is truly enjoyable music.

Well done!

fj