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Right Between The Eyes A little country rock. Leon – Vocal Janice – Vocal I played guitar. The Band: RealTracks in style: ~387:Bass, Electric, Metal Ev 085 RealTracks in song: ~689:Organ, B3, Background Pop Ev 085 RealTracks in style: 666:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm SouthernRock Ev 085 RealTracks in style: 666:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm SouthernRock Ev 085 RealDrums [in Song:BluesRockSlowEv^4-a:Snare , b:Snare, HiHat Also a mandolin RealTrack. Right Between The EyesHe claimed to be a friend of mine And still he told me of his plan Oh, that woman is so fine I’ll steal her from you if I can I’ll try to turn her head Away from you I’ll put it to the test Let’s see if she’ll be true Strange behaviour for a friend I said Not at all the kind of thing That I would expect Didn’t see it coming Took me by surprise Didn’t bother sneaking around Hit me right between the eyes Mmmmm Right between the eyes He claimed to be a friend of mine Thought my girl would double time me He didn’t care what I would feel Just set out to undermine me She sent him packing She spurned him good I knew our love was strong I knew she would Strange behaviour for a friend I said Not at all the kind of thing That I would expect Didn’t see it coming Took me by surprise Didn’t bother sneaking around Hit me right between the eyes Mmmmm Right between the eyes He claimed to be a friend of mine We can let bygones be bygones I am sure that given time We can put all this behind us I said I think you might be Somewhat deluded From this day forth old pal Our friendship is concluded Strange behaviour for a friend I said Not at all the kind of thing That I would expect Didn’t see it coming Took me by surprise Didn’t bother sneaking around He hit me right between the eyes Mmmmm Right between the eyes
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Peter & Leon,
I like the way you tear into this romp through Leon`s wryly funny take on that friendship: my favourite lines
I said I think you might be
Somewhat deluded
From this day forth old pal
Our friendship is concluded
A great rollicking backtrack and Peter`s lead and support guitars makes it sound like a party to celebrate the end of this friend!
Robert
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Peter & Leon, HA! A fun song. It has a Prine flavor to it (though John would have likely lost the girl).  The BAND works well. Just what the song needed. A solid vocal (always). And Janice is always a good addition. Good guitar additions. And a good mix. Right between the ears... fj
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Well, you guys sure hit the bullseye on this one. Great band, great voices, great guitar, and the lyrics tell a sad story with a happy ending.
She sent him packing
She spurned him good
I knew our love was strong
I knew she would
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It works! haha. Really enjoyed it, a stirring story about that rare thing, loyalty in love. Didn't expect the twist - i.e. that the singer would actually keep the girl - I was ready for a betrayal/sob story kinda thing. This twist really works and is refreshing. Good job from every angle.
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Peter & Leon,
I like the way you tear into this romp through Leon`s wryly funny take on that friendship: my favourite lines
I said I think you might be
Somewhat deluded
From this day forth old pal
Our friendship is concluded
A great rollicking backtrack and Peter`s lead and support guitars makes it sound like a party to celebrate the end of this friend!
Robert
Thanks Robert appreciate the review.
Peter
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A good Love song!
Well done.
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Very well crafted song. The guitar is great Nice backing vocals Lion and Janice. Mixed in nicely. Good one.
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Clever write as per usual, good vocals (always a treat hearing Janice in the mix), top notch guitar work ... what's not to like?
Good one guys and gal, enjoyed.
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Hello Peter, Leon and Janice,
This is a very funny story you sang about. It 'Hit me right between the eyes'!
The way you sing this was easy to imagine, right in front of my eyes!
Well done, the three of you,
Hans
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Peter & Leon, HA! A fun song. It has a Prine flavor to it (though John would have likely lost the girl). The BAND works well. Just what the song needed. A solid vocal (always). And Janice is always a good addition. Good guitar additions. And a good mix. Right between the ears... fj Thanks floyd appreciate all the comments. Peter
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Well Peter you let the reins go a little bit on the intro. Very cool intro. Love the vocal and lyric. Guitar was just smokin. Well done.
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Yea I hear a little John Prine also.
This song has everything, great vocal, harmony, chord progression, guitar leads and mix.
This is a winner.
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floyd and Marty,
Thanks for mentioning my small part!
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Well, you guys sure hit the bullseye on this one. Great band, great voices, great guitar, and the lyrics tell a sad story with a happy ending.
She sent him packing
She spurned him good
I knew our love was strong
I knew she would Thanks appreciate the comments. Peter
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It works! haha. Really enjoyed it, a stirring story about that rare thing, loyalty in love. Didn't expect the twist - i.e. that the singer would actually keep the girl - I was ready for a betrayal/sob story kinda thing. This twist really works and is refreshing. Good job from every angle. Thanks a lot. Peter
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A good Love song!
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Very well crafted song. The guitar is great Nice backing vocals Lion and Janice. Mixed in nicely. Good one. Thanks for the comments. Peter
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Hi Peter,
Well, that was lots of fun. Loved the way that backing track just kept romping on.
Great guitar work, excellent vocals again, with Janice always adding that extra sparkle
to everything she sings on.
A great song with clever lyrics.
Enjoyed immensely.
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Very well crafted song. The guitar is great Nice backing vocals Lion and Janice. Mixed in nicely. Good one. Clever write as per usual, good vocals (always a treat hearing Janice in the mix), top notch guitar work ... what's not to like?
Good one guys and gal, enjoyed.
Hello Peter, Leon and Janice,
This is a very funny story you sang about. It 'Hit me right between the eyes'!
The way you sing this was easy to imagine, right in front of my eyes!
Well done, the three of you,
Hans Thanks y’all! Janice
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