Originally Posted By: BlueAttitude
Impressive writing as always, especially since you wrote some of it 30 years ago!

My favorite verse:

"halfway along a tightrope
between the sun and moon
just like Hollywood our hands touching
not a moment too soon"

Also like how you come back to that theme:

"would that feel like holding hands
between the sun and moon"

Track sounds good, I really like the little instrumental break.

Very nice, Robert.



Thank you, Dave!
Back then I had just discovered country music and was thinking the lines would suit an old style country song- after a few attempts I realised that`s a style I should avoid!
I appreciate your positive comments.

Originally Posted By: BabuMusic
Love these lyrics, Robert, including (or maybe especially) the 30 year-old start. Very clever writing and a very engaging presentation.


Thanks for your listen, Marty.

Originally Posted By: Scott C
This is a very cool track Robert. Loved the way you recorded the vocal on this. Very cool lyric. The cello was also a very nice touch. Well done


Scott,
Still in the closet for vocals- getting quite comfortable there.
Thanks for your thumbs up!

Robert