Originally Posted By: Rustyspoon#
Robert,
Very nice resurrection! Beautiful lyrics & melody. Very bard'esque tune. Musical bed is perfect for this, not busy, so it is easy to follow storyline. Enjoyed it much. Thank you for sharing.

Misha.


Thanks, Misha!
I appreciate the nod to the melody ( based on a chord progression from a French gypsy ballad).

Originally Posted By: Leon1
Hi Robert
'Pick a love story from a hat, it was better than that'. Just one of many good lines. Much enjoyed.
Regards,
Leon


Leon,
Thank you for your listen and comments!

Originally Posted By: jannesan
Very nice lyrics, easier to follow than in some of your earlier songs. Although the story is not that dark at a first glance, the melody and especially the cello turn it to a quite sad one which touches me. Very nice imagery like "halfway along a tightrope". And I like the evolving chorus text.

Janne


Janne,
I debated about the cello as it does tend to darken the mood- in the end I couldn`t find a better fit.
Thanks for your attentive listen and kind comments.

Originally Posted By: MarioD
Robert this is excellent. Loved that instrumental break. You vocal is spot on and your mix was perfect but what took it over the top for me were the lyrics. How did you come up with them?

Excellent song.


Mario,
Some of the references came from a "famous lovers" Google- it could have been a long song but I limited the list to one example each from Fairy Tales,History, Fiction and Movies.
Thanks for the likes!

Robert