constructive criticism as far as it ever applied to me always improved my songwriting.The old saying less is more I think would improve your song a lot.Im not a big lover of over effecting the vocal (except with some reverb or echo)but everyone to their own thing.I agree with the comment that the sax should stay out of the vocal and as Ive always loved the drums to belt out in up tempo tracks then maybe it could come up just a bit. But anyway a good listen Cheers Frankie


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