Originally Posted By: rayc
Is melodic string part mean t to lean left - (the flute does that also) ?
The string, generally are loud and they blur a bit when those fast descending runs happen.
Perhaps shorten the delay and lengthen the reverb.
I'm not in the room with you so am, really, only guessing. The final note of the piece end abruptly tooo.
As a composition and arrangement - NICE ONE Mike.

Hi Ray,
Thanks for your usual honest and forthright appraisal. It is much appreciated.
Re the strings and flute leaning to the left, the panning for both instruments was set at zero, but when I look at the audio tracks I can see that, in places, the left channel is slightly stronger!?! I have attempted to ameliorate this in a remix (see below).
Re the strings being a bit loud, I have edited this to soften the passage.
Re the final note ending too abruptly, I have fixed this.
If you are interested, I have uploaded the remix with these changes (plus others) to SoundCloud:
https://soundcloud.com/user-952388172/rapture-remix
The original version/link is still up:
https://soundcloud.com/user-952388172/rapture
Thanks again Ray,
Mike

Last edited by mkg50 (Mike G); 05/11/20 09:01 PM.
Mike Garry
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