Richard,
Nice modern tune. Smooth female vocals. Listens well. The only suggestion is instruments are overpowering vocals.

One of the best lessons I learned from folks on this forum is try to give space to vocals (or any instruments for that matter) to avoid muddiness.
1)Volumes 2) Frequency clashes. The volume balance is straight forward lower instruments, up (or ride) the vocals. Frequency clashes... I am still learning. I am getting better,but not to the level I want to get. I suggest you look into two of these items. Thank you for sharing.

Misha.