I did enjoy the song...I just finished a song about trees, and I am an old man, so it fit me well.

The instruments did build up nicely in the beginning. But I lost interest somewhere after the middle. I went back and played it again from the middle, and I can't say completely what it was. But I had two thoughts. Since there aren't any lyrics written down, I may have missed something but it seems like the main message of the song is already delivered by about mid-way. Also, the arrangement stared getting a little think with instruments. Don't get me wrong, I am a jazz fan and I love the sound of the saxophone. But I felt it didn't fit here, and it seemed like the vocals receded to the background around the point the saxophone came in. At about 2:19, with fiddle playing nicely in my right ear, it seemed like the vocals were completely blended with all the other music.

Please take anything useful here and feel free to discard all else!

Glenn