I put the music together in about 2 or 3 hours, so it's kind of rough. The acoustic guitar parts were off the cuff. In some places they work, in others they don't. I'll need to go back and do some more recordings and then pick and choose the parts that fit best. I also will likely revise the lyrics a few more times. This is a sketch, a placeholder to come back to later.
That being said, I'm open to suggestions on changes I might consider for this song. Thanks in advance to everyone who gives this a listen.