Hi TexasFrets,

I agree with Dave (post above) you made a nice song. Fine melody and good sung!
Nice story too.

I heard a little disturbance (overstretched?) of the nice vocals. I think the cause is in the in the recording maybe?
Doesn't matter much. You did a very good job in so little time (really 3 hours?).
To me 'that is an acceptance that I will never apprehend everything that there is to know'... (free from your Translitic text).

Nice day,
Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130