Deej,

This is excellent! Everything about it had me paying attention. From melody to arrangement, vocals to production, lyrical flow to storyline, this song jumps some really amazing writing hurdles, and it clears them with plenty of ease. You're on a winner with this write! In addition, your vocals really soar.

I love the way that you set up and then present the word "Complete". That's first class writing!

It's been a while since I've spent any time in Users Showcase. I'm really glad that this song was at the top of the list for me to find!

All the best,
Noel


MY SONGS...
Audiophile BIAB 2025