Something else caught my attention. The lyrics just seemed to work to hard at avoiding any strong rhymes. There were only two examples in all the phrases where words were strong rhymes. Le Miz caught it with
Quote:
" You have a very unusual rhyme scheme. (Irregular.) "


Even words which should have rhymed did not.. e.g.,
Quote:
She holds her hand
Closes her eyes
And pretends it’s a mans


Hands and Mans would have been better.

OK, no biggie there are many other forms of rhyming other than strong (I took Pat's course), but this, combined with Post #1, just seems to be a setup.

Having said that, all the info provided was good and the intentions were admirable. And Like I said, the OP is welcome back at any time.


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