Originally Posted By: Chris Dent
Wow. This track led me to listen to your other tracks on reverbnation and everything there is really excellent.


Thanks very much! I also checked you out, I really like your style of playing.

Originally Posted By: rayc
This is wonderful...fast and fabulous.
Yuo know what I'd probably say about the kick drum.
In terms or vocal performance I though
"don't you worry to be seen
we're finding a place in between"
sounded rushed and uncertain.
I know we speak different versions of the same language but the pronunciation of a as a hard vowel in "...A dream" seemed wrong/jarring as it's not really the casual use as demonstrated in the rest of the lyric.
Now, that's me, someone who speaks a different version of the language so ignore as you see fit.
Again, wonderful song very quickly assembled ...perhaps a few more breathes needed.


Hi Ray,

I like the "A" instead of "a" myself, matter of opinion I guess.

For the "don't you worry to be seen, we're finding a place in between" line, it was my decision to leave that phrasing in there.
For this song she gave me two vocal takes, and the first time she sang it straight. The first time I heard it I didn't like it at all and was going to swap it out, but then it started to grow on me after listening a few times. For me it sounds delicate and vulnerable and fits the mood of the piece.
But, as with all these songs the final decision is not made until it is time to do a new CD, and we will revisit at that time with fresh ears smile

Thanks for pointing out the problem with the kick, I know more or less how to fix it, also thanks to you, but sometimes I forget because my ears are just not good enough to be able to hear it myself wink

Dave

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