A good write with some subtle self examination, avoiding cliches.
Lots of mentionable lines; I like these:
a fool opens dangerous doors
forgiveness has its limits, you reached yours
The way Janice bends the melody adds to the hurt of the theme and Peter`s guitar has just the right edge.
I agree with Dave;that little vocal treatment on "callin` callin" is sublime!
Very good work from all four collaborators.
Robert
Thank you Robert. All credit to floyd for those lines. And, yes, we feel the same about Peter’s guitar. And we appreciate that mention of the vocal treatment. Glad it worked for you!
J&B