Originally Posted By: Bawb
Hi Floyd,

This is a really well-written song. I can really see the whole thing unfold as you sing the words.
The best way I can describe this song is like biting into a Werther's Candy and a sharp piece sticking you in the side of your gum. Kind of sweet, but kinda brings a tear to your eye.
Thanks for posting it...


Thanks, Bawb! Love that description! HA! Those Werther's always stick my teeth together when I bite down...


Originally Posted By: furry
Floyd, this is a cracker of a song. Really great powerful vocals. This has to be my favourite of your songs to date. It doesn't remind me of anyone else, it's got your stamp on it, A BEAUTY !!


Very nice of you to say, Graham... Thanks.



Originally Posted By: dcuny
Dang, you can really sell a song with your vocals.

i still believe love lasts forever
so she'll have to be the one to say goodbye

That's one heck of a write - grabs the heart, wrenches it out, and stomps it to bits. laugh

And those strings are really effective. Still waiting for mine to show up.


Thanks for all of that, David. I was waiting to see your reaction to the strings - since you do them well... Please feel free to comment "deeper" (as I continue this path) if you have any "concerns" or suggestions for improvement...

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