Originally Posted By: Deej56
Peter,

Love the opening on this—really engaging. The repetition of “fine line” works vey well, setting up the song structure, and everything plays off that. Really like the lyrics here—you carry the theme of contrasting extremes all the way through both consistently and meaningfully. Really like this one—well done!

Oh, and that drum just kicked in around the three minute mark—nice touch.

Kind regards,

Deej


Thanks Deej appreciate that.

Peter