Hans,

A nice song about a subject that many can relate to.

The build up of instruments is nicely done. And your vocal has a lot of passion.

The guitar is just slightly too loud in comparison to your vocal. When the accordion joins, it is too. They both "draw attention to themselves" instead of being "supportive". (They are well balanced to each other). The bass is a at a good level when it joins (compared to the other instruments). Cool aahs, too...

During the chorus, the vocal gets lifted to a good level.

All in all, a good mix (but the early vocal needs a slight bump).

Good stuff.

fj