Originally Posted By: Rustyspoon#
Robert,
I hope the selling part was at least in some way as smooth as this tune smile

You are one skilled story teller!
Choruses are so different, yet work very well. Excellent performance! Mix is very good, but I think fiddle might be asking for a little reverb. Enjoyed it! Thank you for sharing.

Misha.



Misha,
Not at all easy selling a house these days!
I`m glad you like that change of feel on the chorus. I think I did put an eq on the fiddle to try to lift it apart from the el.guitar- will listen again to reverb levels.
Thanks for your comments.


Originally Posted By: animarorecords
Robert,

Very nice song!
The chord progression of the beginning of the melody is great.
The tight drum is wonderful.
Your narrative vocal are comfortable as usual.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi


Thank you Shigeki!


Originally Posted By: Deej56
Robert,

Terrific tune . . . I’m not sure why but it reminds me of R.E.M. . . . just in the style of write, the delivery of the vocal and some of those cool chord changes. Cool listen!

All my best,

Deej


Deej,
I can hear that REM sound a little too ( though its been years since I listened to them).
Thanks for those likes!


Originally Posted By: BlueAttitude

Nice intro with the Fiddle! Works well for the solo too.

Excellent writing as per usual, Floyd's favorite line is also mine, and I also really like the first part of that verse:

"sometimes she wants to walk out of our painting
we have to widen the frame
when someones been close to heaven
you just want to stay near their flame"

I get the R.E.M. vibe too in spots, mostly the vocal delivery I think.

Good song, Robert.

Happy belated Canada Day!


Dave,
A happy aha! moment when that verse was written- I appreciate the quote and your other kind comments.
A strange, same as any other day, Canada Day this year!

Robert