Roger, I liked everything about this! I think this is the first song of yours that I've had the pleasure of listening to, and I'm glad to know you through it!

One thought I had as I was listening is that your southern accent helps you make some Rhymes that, in my Yankee accent, would never fly, like "on" and "drawn...

It was a very peaceful song and, taking the message in your lyric, I figure you live a pretty peaceful life as well. Thanks for posting!


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