rayc wrote <You voice sounds just a little disembodied>
Yep , I agree , I was not blessed with a good voice.

rayc wrote <I wasn't fussed on the solos.>
sorry.
rayc wrote <I think your melody and the general lyric are pretty good.>
Thankyou , I appreciate that.

rayc wrote < That drum bit at the end could do with surgical removal. >
Yep , I agree , pretty lame.

Thankyou for listening and taking the trouble to comment.

Hey , I just realised you are a fellow Aussie. Do you ever get up to the Northern Rivers ?