A lot of terrific poetry going on here. I like how you bring all the imagery back and tie it together with the very simple line 'when her eyes shine.' When 'hither and thither' came in, I almost thought you were going to rap. But not. Another highly creative effort by you that I enjoyed a great deal.


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