Lovely melody - it does a great job capturing that wistful feeling.

I like this song a lot, but the arrangement sounds very Band in a Box - a whole lot of everything going all at once.

I see you've got 14 songs to go, but I can imagine this a bit slower and more rubato, piano and no drums. Just in case you you feel like revisiting it again. wink


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?