That's really good. I like the driving rock.... almost punk style. Kinda like talking heads and the cars to a degree....80's rock.

I don't understand the words.... it would be good to see a print out of the words.... and a listing of the instrument tracks.

what the???? Oh... I was typing and the end came as it switched to a totally different song..... then I jumped up to the video.... thinking it was done..... nope....

yeah... I like it.

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