Dero13, Hard to follow the line. Almost pieced together like a quilt.
Dero13....I almost made the same comment but decided not to.
The above is correct....there's no real motif or musical reference for the listeners to associate with or relate to.
Maybe it
would fit well in the soundtrack genre.
From my POV....instrumentals have to be well constructed to keep my interest.
They can easily get very dull and uninteresting.
So....it may be more challenging to compose a catchy composition to retain a listening audience than it is to write a song.
This music writing is not easy.

Carry on....
EDIT: I checked out several of your other compositions.
I would categorize them as soundtrack/soundscape/ambient/instrumental genres.
Not to be confused with songs....these are
compositions..... and they sound fine.