Hi Ray ...
In my opinion, using these almost 73 year-old ears, it still sounds a bit thin on the lower end EQs (I'm guessing in the 40hz to 60hz range). If the bass had a little more punch, I think it would carry the song somewhat better and give it some extra "drive" for a medium tempo alt rock song.
Alan
Thanks for the kind words and perspective.
Yes, the bottom end is a little empty..the WARMER mix tried to fill that with the bottom end of the guitars and bass. I think it went a little too far and became a little muddy without the punch.
I've done a subsequent mix that, along with adding some more energy to the vocals in the chorus, fills in the bottom end a little with a low end synth. I've yet to spend time listening to the mix to decide whether or not I should abandon it there.
Thanks again.