Thank you to Chulaivet1966,
You're welcome.
You'll find this is a very helpful forum.
NOTE: it's been said here that the "Showcase" is not necessarily a forum for song
critiques but to show/emphasize the
versatility of this fine BIAB progrem.
Depending on one's desired response sometimes the "Song Writing" forum may be a more appropriate forum to request specific critiques/feedback.
You asked for some feed back and I'm glad you received all the comments as intended.
Being....candid and respectfully submitted.
Carry on....